Aftab Saqib
Aug 31, 2023

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Abeera Fatima, your heartfelt blog conveys the importance of gratitude and acknowledging those who've made a positive impact. However, to better align with the "A Gift Overdue" project instructions, consider incorporating the actual content of the handwritten/digital thank-you letter to your cousin Hadia. Providing specific instances that illustrate Hadia's influence and tying them to the lessons you've learned would enhance your reflection. Additionally, explicitly connecting your experience to the project's objective of creative letters and expressing gratitude could strengthen your submission. Your advice on kindness and the conclusion tie well with the project's theme. Great work, Abeera!

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Aftab Saqib

Aftab Saqib is a Certified Trainer, Entrepreneur, and Business Development Consultant with expertise in coaching individuals and startups.